This week was a pretty slow week. Last week I pitched my thesis to the faculty and I tried to apply some of their critiques to my story.
- I did a quick reworking of my story and showed it to Raquel. It was decided that I shouldn't rework my story as much as I should just keep refining the story I had last so those new thumbnails were scrapped
- In class Friday we spent the whole day editing my story. I feel like the story is getting more entertaining but as of right now it is too convoluted. This next week I will be trying to cut it down
- Modeling of the main character is now starting!